I have loved this story since it was first released in Choicescript and am glad to see it still being worked on. Can't wait for this demo to reach and get past all that was previously available!
Loved the update! found a few errors, chose Emilia but she kept being referred to as Emil using masculine pronouns. The error messages that popped up included the following:
Love the update but got to this point and cannot get further even though I am sure there is more. No choice "turns the page" so to speak. I am on mobile but not sure if that makes a difference,
I really really wanted to experience the update, but being a slow reader, reading on mobile and having pages jumping without me even realizing I was being timed, I just can't even finish it. I am interested in this story but because of how slow I read I can't actually finish it or enjoy reading with the timers. I am sorry, I hope everything goes well for you!
Loved the update! There was one inconsistency where I picked the choice to write in the journal often but then in the bath got the line that the water was more calming than writing in the journal because I didn't write in it often. One thing I would really love is to give us a light mode option back. For those of us with astigmatism, reading white letters on a black background can actually damage our eyesight more. Other than that it was fantastic and I can't wait for more!
The update was fantastic! I cannot wait for more! One thing I did notice is when coming back to the shuttle after choosing not to go after the sniper the text seemed a bit confused. Came back with Ki-Ha and Joia but then the next page had me asking where they were. And when asking where Raxha was on the page after that the response to that question was "yes we should get Skylar..."
